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This is a place to share greentexts and witness the confounding life of Anon. If you're new to the Greentext community, think of it as a sort of zoo with Anon as the main attraction.

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Anon tries to keep his hands busy (sh.itjust.works)

submitted 5 months ago by Early_To_Risa@sh.itjust.works to c/greentext@sh.itjust.works

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[–] frightful_hobgoblin@lemmy.ml 62 points 5 months ago (3 children)

Story didn't go anywhere

[–] fibojoly@sh.itjust.works 96 points 5 months ago (3 children)

Well yeah, it's a slice of life, not the Hero's Journey.

[–] MadBob@feddit.nl 63 points 5 months ago

This motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn't revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue...

[–] manuallybreathing@lemmy.ml 4 points 5 months ago (1 children)

Its totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU

[–] steal_your_face@lemmy.ml 1 points 5 months ago

Long John silvers gold?

[–] Kusimulkku@lemm.ee 1 points 5 months ago (1 children)

Could've made it more interesting though

[–] LemmyKnowsBest@lemmy.world 2 points 5 months ago (1 children)

Yeah could've added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.

[–] Kusimulkku@lemm.ee 2 points 5 months ago

Idk about adding, I would've just changed what is already there to be more interesting

[–] Instigate@aussie.zone 36 points 5 months ago

One of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.

[–] festnt@sh.itjust.works 19 points 5 months ago

yeah, stories dont walk, duh