syreus

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[โ€“] syreus@lemmy.world 12 points 3 weeks ago (1 children)

This is much better but your previous comment was awful. It read like a LLM alone wrote it.

That being said I can't tell you why specifically it reads like that. I'm forwarding it to my friend who is a English professor to find out. If English is your second language then just keep at it and please don't take the criticism here personally.

[โ€“] syreus@lemmy.world 9 points 4 weeks ago* (last edited 4 weeks ago) (1 children)

Please tell me of this enlightened place you come from where racism and discrimination do not exist. Surely they also are accepting refugees and I need but apply? No?

Everyone but my tribe are _______. Hehe I'm so clever.